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    Post by Makavelilives* Fri Dec 25, 2009 12:41 am

    Twas the night before Christmas, when all through the house
    A father with 2 kids ruthlessly beat his spouse
    A look on his face that expressed no care
    A look into his eyes had the devil's glare

    The children lay awake eyes open in bed
    Thoughts of tomorrow circling in their heads
    Christmas isn't happy for everyone on the map
    And so i try to tell you that in this poem/rap

    The kids didn't get presents yes that was the matter
    And so they hustled until their pockets got fatter
    This way easy and fast
    Though treacherous and violent it still made cash

    The moon on the breast of the new-fallen snow
    Excitement to play in it none of them showed
    What, in their curious eyes it would appear
    They were praying for a better start to the New Year

    Makin' more money then they dad, selling those bricks
    They didn't need to ask their parents to buy new kicks
    Like they self-employed like they self-proclaimed
    What happened at home made them show no shame

    The thugs, hustlers, and convicts they would mix in
    They thought it wasn't bad at least they weren't killin
    Smoked the blunt slowly as the snow started to fall
    Not realizing what they did was slowly killing them all

    As Christmas was coming by
    None of them realized cause they were too busy gettin high
    It seems time itself, had grown wings and flew
    No time for anything their lives were as good as through

    And then, in a twinkling, they heard on the roof
    But ignored cause their lives was enough proof
    Cause when they were younger they saw the sky and ground
    But in both places Santa was not to be found

    It was Christmas bored and they all stay put
    Thinkin they cool with the Jordan's on each foot
    One of their homies pulled up in his new 'lac
    Introduced them to the guns, the straps and the macks

    They were reluctant to the contrary
    The only good left in them told them to stay stationary
    That act left room for the good to develop and grow
    Trying to keep itself warm while stuck in the snow

    The blunts they were smoking dangle around their teeth
    Feeling something, not sure what is beneath
    It was good, cold and sticky yet tasty like jelly
    Unsure of this feeling they lay back and rap Makaveli

    They didn't know what to think, of themselves
    Feeling like their lives are a dusty book shelf
    They look at each other, then turn their heads
    Wondering what could have filled two lives with such dread

    Father seemed to change one day coming back from work
    No longer grumpy and tired acting like a jerk
    Arms open wide a hug he would pose
    And so the goodness in the kids once again rose

    They spoke not a word, quiet as a dog whistle
    Realizing that Christmas is sort of like a missile
    Only good for those who cannot see the bad of it in sight
    But bad for those who don't know what to expect through the night.

    Twas the Night before Christmas
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    Post by JUSTINA Fri Dec 25, 2009 7:16 am

    You put it all in a simple, but truthful way.
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    Post by 2SC Adil Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:52 pm

    Bro this is so real man, I love it, thanks!! +rep and +50 points
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    Post by Makavelilives* Fri Dec 25, 2009 1:58 pm

    Thanks guys
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    Post by 2SC Adil Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:01 pm

    Bro, how long did it take to finish that!?
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    Post by Makavelilives* Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:04 pm

    Lol not that long.
    It was sort of like a freestyle
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    Post by 2SC Adil Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:05 pm

    Awesome! Great talent Smile
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    Post by Makavelilives* Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:08 pm

    Thanks man.
    Im surprised it came out ok too
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    Post by 2SC Adil Fri Dec 25, 2009 2:09 pm

    Yeah, it came out very well!
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    Post by GuardadoMusic Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:13 pm

    Very true, very deep, you're getting better, y'know ML?
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    Post by Makavelilives* Sun Dec 27, 2009 3:27 pm

    Thanks GM all cause of you.
    For real homie you were the first to give me feedback, comments, advice.
    Much love man
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    Post by GuardadoMusic Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:31 pm

    Really? Me the first? I guess you didn't show to your friends or what?
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    Post by Makavelilives* Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:33 pm

    Lol of course not.
    Where i used to live pretty much all my friends though they were some hardcore rappers. I knew i was better than them but they thought they were sooooo hot. It was funny though cause they weren't even that good. Next time i go back imma rap battle to embarrass them lol
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    Post by GuardadoMusic Sun Dec 27, 2009 8:25 pm

    Don't be too full of yourself man, you never know Wink
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    Post by Makavelilives* Sun Dec 27, 2009 11:44 pm

    Lol i know what you mean. Kinda pissed me off cause they straight up sucked but what they did is they got everyone expect me, put together some gay little group, and thought they were all cool making beats and raps of a freakin demo thing. They did it to exclude me make me think i suck. Imma go back there maybe saturday just to make some things clear.
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    Post by 2SC Adil Mon Dec 28, 2009 7:05 am

    ML = Rap king lol Razz
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    Post by GuardadoMusic Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:28 am

    People can change too. Perhaps they got better...
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    Post by Makavelilives* Mon Dec 28, 2009 11:53 am

    *Chuckles* Nope they cocky. Fake and cocky and they looked down on me.
    Lol thanks Adil you know it
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    Post by GuardadoMusic Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:24 pm

    Alright man, you go show them!
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    Post by Makavelilives* Mon Dec 28, 2009 12:46 pm

    Haha thanks.
    Gonna show em what its really about
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    Post by 2SC Adil Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:09 pm

    Lol, show em!!! Very Happy

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