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    A new day

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    Post by PacForLife on Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:20 pm

    Well I wake up from bed and find that it's a new day
    Hopin that the world is movin through a better way
    But when I come to the streets I hear some niggaz say
    Fuck the world this is shit mate
    But well I go & tell'em
    That the world is a nice place if you just know who to hang with
    But in the end they hate life
    Thinkin that it's fights & struggeling to survive
    but that ain't right
    we need to move on as a community & have a good night
    we need to move as a group, no people on their own
    helpin people is nice, gives peace to people when they're alone
    but it's sad watchin some people wastin millions on cars
    and others are just struggeling for food & dreamin of stars
    So that's why we need to help people out
    know their feelings & what that sadness is about
    that's how this world is gonnabe together
    peace in the streets forever
    & we just here sit & rhyme
    Maybe we'll get some millions over time
    We need to find peace not to go make some rhymes
    Peace nigga.. we'll get that after some time

    R.I.P 2pac.

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    Post by PacForLife on Sun Dec 27, 2009 4:38 pm

    Wtf.. That poll is screwed by me.. Soz hahaha now I knw wtf it is now..
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    Post by Makavelilives* on Sun Dec 27, 2009 5:52 pm

    Lol i don't get the poll
    Rap was pretty ok
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    Post by GuardadoMusic on Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:33 pm

    Rap could be better, you got the idea and message down straight forward, but you could work on being more creative with words Very Happy
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    Post by Makavelilives* on Sun Dec 27, 2009 6:34 pm

    Yea some better rhymes would make it tigher
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    Post by 2SC Adil on Mon Dec 28, 2009 6:53 am

    Yeah, room for improvement, nice lyrics! and lol @ your poll Razz


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