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    Post by Makavelilives* on Sun Jan 17, 2010 11:10 pm

    Verse One:

    Now let me tell you what I seen
    Angels and Demons, different from the average teen
    Gangstaz, Thugs, and hustlers, slangin' all lookin' mean
    I made a deal with a dealer and got my hands on some green
    Raised on the streets and taught how to be keen
    So I knew better then to put that shit in my mouth
    Cause if my momma found out, she'd throw my ass out
    Lemme take you back to my old apartment
    A few miles away from every D.C. department
    We were hangin' below the main floor hallways
    A woman walked, limping, coming out way
    Confused teens we didn't know what to do
    She said, take a seat and let me talk to you
    She lived at the end of the hall beneath the lobby.
    She told us she was raped, who helped her, nobody
    Even worse she was on a busy street in broad daylight
    You think the bad guys only come out at night?
    She just got out of jail, she'd been in a fight
    Stabbed a dude with a pitchfork, he might never see light
    She said life is full of mistakes and we are all young
    And that we should limit our mistakes to none
    The laughter had died, nothing seemed fun
    Life is being a burger cause stuck between two buns

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    They say life is short, so live it to the full
    Everyday it seems im livin', under a new rule
    How can you tell me life is short, I've wanted it to end
    So i can stop the pain and stop losing my friends

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    Now we were always ones, to be obnoxious
    Doin' any shit, shut up conscious
    Always was one to fuck with the five-o
    The heat, police, cops, the po-po
    Adults pissed off, so we threw rocks at the car windows
    Dude jumped and almost knocked me out
    Something stopped him, I'll never figure it out
    Cops were on their way and without a doubt
    We ran like we saw water in a desert drought
    Runnin' and runnin', i swear time had slowed
    My friend was bleeding from his ankle to toes
    Keep runnin' or slow down, i didn't even know
    Either the coward or courage of me, started to grow
    I ran back up the street and he had news for us
    The cops were around and he just
    Saw them turnin' lookin' for young asses to bust
    We were walking around, circling the library
    A look into to our eyes showed the meaning of weary
    It was black as night and the cop was crusin'
    He didn't see us or the bushes we were usin'
    Cop drived off and we did it, got away
    If you can make it through the night theres a brighter day

    (Chorus)(X1, X2, we'll figure that out later)

    Verse 3:
    A regular day got off the school bus
    Three of my friends came up to us
    They said look around, what do you see
    Police officers, investigators, down on their knees
    A woman had been murdered, who we didn't know
    Mark Eric Lawlor the killers face would show
    He raped her and beat her to death
    But everyday he would take normal breaths
    We were cool with Mark, the hidden killer
    We didn't know late night he hit the miller
    The police had a meeting, for all the residents
    Told us what happened, what to expect
    Mark was right there, looking like the president
    While others lean on shoulders, cried and wept
    The bastard was even giving cops advice
    Trying to act like the manager he was, chill and nice
    A week had gone but the pain hadn't left
    Cops tackled Mark, murder of Genevive Orange, you're under arrest

    (Chorus again)


    Verse 4:
    The month was June and our adventures would end
    Because i would move and leave all of my friends
    I promised i would visit, every weekend
    Don't make a promise if its one you ain't keepin'
    The summer passed and all i had was memories
    Everyday askin' if they still remembered me
    Questions raisin', i even turned to Astrology
    Thinking which day of the week, would be lucky
    Talking to my old friend about the same subject
    Hes the only one who shares my intellect
    It was Wednesday and the lucky day was Thursday
    My friend, good fortune was coming our way
    That was biggest lie I've told
    The next day felt like a fucking stranglehold
    You know what i mean, we got the call
    My friend had just lost it, lost it all
    For two weeks his mom was in the hospital bed
    Her last moments, she took two deep breaths, then the end
    I know he loved her but he barely cried
    Two weeks, maybe he expected she would die
    November 5, the worst day of my life
    End it now, by gun or by knife
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    Post by GuardadoMusic on Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:41 pm

    This one has a different way of presenting itself then your previous ones. Ths one focuses more on lyrical content and story rather then flow and rhyme. Can't wait to hear this one, what beat are you using? Very Happy
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    Post by Makavelilives* on Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:48 pm

    Yea i wasn't focusing on flow as much and tried to make it a story
    I think i can make it flow somehow
    And beat...
    No idea lol
    And i have been trying to make my own but its real frustrating
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    Post by GuardadoMusic on Mon Jan 18, 2010 4:57 pm

    Don't get discouraged. You can't expect to be making Dre beats when you start.
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    Post by Makavelilives* on Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:41 pm

    Lol of course not its not that i don't make good beats, its that im not sure how to or how to use FL Studio.
    I mean my brother makes beats (Youtube.com/Itsosman) and he could help me but hes sort of a faggot sometimes. I'll just watch what he does so i can learn to make them and get started from there
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    Post by GuardadoMusic on Mon Jan 18, 2010 8:53 pm

    Get him to help you, or ask me if you need anything.
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    Post by Makavelilives* on Mon Jan 18, 2010 9:18 pm

    Ok bro when i get time imma work on the beat for this.
    Imma come back to you if i have any specific questions
    Thanks so much man
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    Post by GuardadoMusic on Mon Jan 18, 2010 10:24 pm

    Here's some inspiration. Samples the theme from EL Leberinto Del Fauno (Pan's Labyrinth)

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    Post by PacForLife on Fri Jan 22, 2010 3:38 pm

    Great one m8. Long story tho, but got your point Very Happy
    When ya sing it, send me the link.. Am waiting Razz
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    Post by Makavelilives* on Fri Jan 22, 2010 5:19 pm

    Yea might not do anything on it until like spring break though lol
    Real busy

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